zer03908 submitted:
Here’s a quick fix that I did with your first one. I just fixed a few anatomies—it looked slightly awkward how the hand holding the coffee cup was over the leg so I got the cup and the hand out of the leg, and for Roxy’s right leg I thought it looked uncomfortable so I just left the right leg and sort of shifted the rest of the body. Except for these minor anatomy problems I thought it looked amazing. I really appreciate your art style—it’s pleasing to look at. :)
As for this picture, I really like the colors that you are choosing here—I like the mix of warm and cool colors, but what gets me wondering about is the direction of the lights. Is the cool color coming from the front or the back? Because most of the parts seem to suggest it is coming from the front, but I also see some parts indicating the light is coming from the back..?? So I’m sort of confused. So I would suggest really focusing on the light source—where each color is coming from and all that. Other than that, I think your art looks great. You seem to have a strong grasp of anatomy structures and all that… I suggest however to consider the anatomies in a more natural sense—just try to keep in mind to make sure that it doesn’t look awkward. Ask yourself if you can pose that way yourself? and when you try to draw hands holding something, try to show that it is really holding it—when you draw the fingers, try to follow the form of the cups(in this case—the cylinder shape) or whatever. showing the thumb is another great way of indicating that the hand is wrapping it around. Yeah so other than that I think your art looks amazing. u_u* Keep up the good work! Hope this crit helped.
(i’m putting my response in a blockquote because blockquoting the whole critique seems silly) thank you very much!!! i…yeah have a lot of trouble with lighting and coloring @_@
dredsina submitted:
From this post. Hm.
That’s a really good and fun redraw! I especially love that you labelled the car XD
Oh yea I think I said I was gonna reblog this uwu
- iScribble doesn’t have an “undo” button
- Everything on iScribble is real art
I confess to ‘accidentally’ never returning some drawing boards to school…
#but we love complaining about how ugly our products are
#...especially during the missoni thing sld;kfjl;safjd
To everyone who worked at Target during the Missoni bullshit, THIS. THIS SO HARD.
(Source: fuckyeahretailrobin)
#reblogs because
#most relevant thing ever
#'sara you've got glitter all over your face were you working in girls?'
#'yes'
![fuckyeahretailrobin:
[Image Description: Background is several triangles in a circle like a pie alternating from true red, scarlet and black. A robin is sitting on his perch looking to the right.Top Text: “WORK IN CHILDREN’S DEPARTMENT”Bottom Text: “BECOME ENCRUSTED WITH MORE MOTHERFUCKING GLITTER THAN ALL FOUR MEMBERS OF POISON AND KE$HA COMBINED”]](http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_luaxajImat1qm3qzeo1_400.jpg)
[Image Description: Background is several triangles in a circle like a pie alternating from true red, scarlet and black. A robin is sitting on his perch looking to the right.
Top Text: “WORK IN CHILDREN’S DEPARTMENT”
Bottom Text: “BECOME ENCRUSTED WITH MORE MOTHERFUCKING GLITTER THAN ALL FOUR MEMBERS OF POISON AND KE$HA COMBINED”]
“What did I say when I found out I had a painful skin virus? ‘All the shingle ladies! All the shingle ladies!’. HA! I crack myself up. No no, wait. What did I say when I got obsessed with eating potato chips out of a can? ‘All the Pringle ladies! All the Pringle ladies!’. LOLZERS!! I feel like I can tell you these jokes here and not be self-conscious. Jay doesn’t like my dad-humor around the house. Ok ok one more. What did I say when I got that game where you pull wooden blocks out of the tower and try to keep it from falling overAUUAHGAHAGHAGGAGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH”
Carlo Crivelli, c. 1470
Papa Jesus is passed out drunk again, even after promising the boys a trip to the Golden Corral. That’s bullshit, dad, they have a chocolate fountain!
(submitted by waitingonthesilentshelf)
My Sim and his doppelganger decided to start a band. Name suggestions, anyone?
seto kaiba’s electric boogaloo
#also i was polite and said nicely 'our infants department is to your left and boys is to your right. beyond boys is girls'
![fuckyeahretailrobin:
[Image Description: Background is several triangles in a circle like a pie alternating from true red, scarlet and black. A robin is sitting on his perch looking to the right.Top Text: “::SNAPS FINGERS:: GIRL! ::POINTS TO SHELF::”Bottom Text: “BITCH, I’M WEARING A NAME TAG.”]
This is a true story from my tenure as a clerk in a department store. I was about fifteen feet from the patron, who apparently felt this was an entirely appropriate way to get my attention for assistance. I stared at the customer for a solid ten seconds before I finally heard “Excuse me, I need help with something,” and I sauntered over with a smile. (The customer was asking for the cost of a item…which was clearly marked with a price tag.)
Dude okay, like three weeks ago, I was repackaging tights, when someone behind me said something like “KIZCLOZE” rather loudly. After a moment of wondering whether the exclamation was directed at me, I turned around to a woman who was staring at me, who then stuck her hand three inches from my face and started waving it around as if testing whether or not I was blind. She then repeated, “KIDS’ CLOTHES,” with no other acknowledgement to my existence, and I pointed her to the spot fifteen feet in front of her. Which was where KIDS’ CLOTHES was.
RUDE.](http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ltlbeeyWKB1qm3qzeo1_400.jpg)
[Image Description: Background is several triangles in a circle like a pie alternating from true red, scarlet and black. A robin is sitting on his perch looking to the right.
Top Text: “::SNAPS FINGERS:: GIRL! ::POINTS TO SHELF::”
Bottom Text: “BITCH, I’M WEARING A NAME TAG.”]This is a true story from my tenure as a clerk in a department store. I was about fifteen feet from the patron, who apparently felt this was an entirely appropriate way to get my attention for assistance. I stared at the customer for a solid ten seconds before I finally heard “Excuse me, I need help with something,” and I sauntered over with a smile. (The customer was asking for the cost of a item…which was clearly marked with a price tag.)
Dude okay, like three weeks ago, I was repackaging tights, when someone behind me said something like “KIZCLOZE” rather loudly. After a moment of wondering whether the exclamation was directed at me, I turned around to a woman who was staring at me, who then stuck her hand three inches from my face and started waving it around as if testing whether or not I was blind. She then repeated, “KIDS’ CLOTHES,” with no other acknowledgement to my existence, and I pointed her to the spot fifteen feet in front of her. Which was where KIDS’ CLOTHES was.
RUDE.
